Hi all, I'm sending around the updated materials and some of the comments
that were gathered at the meeting. I've tried to incorporate most of the
feedback. It would be great if you can try to look this over as quickly as
possible so I can send updated versions to the large list early tomorrow for
in solidarity and great work!!!
Comments for advisory.
- Add Edmonton and surrounding area.
- Put environment after democracy.
- Address run on sentence in second paragraph.
- Add movements to groups in last line.
*Edmonton to Join Occupy Wall Street Protests on Global Day of Action*
*Edmonton, AB –* On Saturday, October 15th Edmonton will join with over 1300
cities around the world in supporting a growing ‘Occupy Wall Street/Occupy
The Occupy Edmonton group is concerned about how corporate interests are
infecting our political institutions and dictating public policy and are
decimating the environment. They are also concerned about a system that puts
the hunger for profits at all costs above the health and well being of our
Occupy Edmonton is united with groups and movements around the world that
want a system that works for, not against, the 99% of us.
*What: Occupy Edmonton Rally and March.*
*Who: *Concerned residents of Edmonton and surrounding communities.
*When: *Saturday, October 15th starting at 12:00 p.m.
*Where: *Sir Winston Churchill Square, Edmonton, Alberta
For more information please visit: http://www.OccupyEdmonton.org
Eduardo Martinez: xx
Chelsea Taylor: xx